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  1. 23-01-17, 13:56 #1
    GC12
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    A poem I wrote.

    Hi folks,
    This is my first post and hopefully more will follow.

    It is a poem in which I wrote last night. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

    Fear

    I live in Fear everyday
    Fear of failure
    Fear of disappointment
    And Fear of disappointing

    It hurts, it's pain
    The thought of hurting
    The thought of Failing
    The thought of disappointing

    I do smile often
    I get butterflies often
    My heart flutters often
    I live happy.

    And that's because of you.
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  2. 23-01-17, 17:47 #2
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    Re: A poem I wrote.

    I lke that!
    I feel like that and also feel like that for my partner .. goood writing
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    Re: A poem I wrote.

    Loved it! x
    i haven't wrote one for a long time i ought to pick up doing it again
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