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hurtssomuch
14-07-06, 01:09
<center> almost all of my poetry comes from some kind of pain, or depresive emotion, i lied down for a nap, and when i woke there was music playing in my head, a hard rock ballad, sounding allot like cinderella's music, so i closed my eyes, and this is what i heard,




Heaven,
Was in the palm of my hand,
Then my fingers lost there grip,
Now alone here I stand.

I said heaven,
I was almost home free,
you broke into my heart,
And then you threw away the key.

Tear, drops, fall,
And I cry out your name,
The love that I have lost,
None will ever be the same.

Oh please heaven,
Come back to me,
i am nothing with out you,
its with you i want to be

Now heaven,
Closed its gates on this man,
So heartless I do stand,
Back here where I began.

And heaven,
Is know longer the place for me,
The glowing light of love,
Is something I think ill never see.

So, tear, drops, fall,
And I still cry out your name,
This love that I have lost,
I know, I will never be the same.

Oh please heaven,
Come back to me,
i am nothing with out you,
its with you i want to be



Oh heaven,
I am begging you please,
Listen to my heart,
I am down here on my knees.

Tears from heaven,
Raining down on my face,
Telling me they are sorry,
I’m not welcome in this place.

My, tear, drops, fall,
I am crying out your name,
Please my love don’t go,
Life just will not be the same.

Oh please heaven,
Come back to me,
i am nothing with out you,
its with you i want to be


Its heaven,
I can no longer see,
I’m now in the dark,
And this is where I will be.

For eternity.

Oh please heaven,
Heaven,
Come back to me,

I said heaven,
Heaven,

Please come back to me.


the title came from both the words, and the tears i cryed writing it down, this is the first song i have ever writen,



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the tears i cry will forever be in vein

Daisybun
14-07-06, 07:58
Ed, this is so touching, beautiful but sad

Take care
Daisybun

'This too will pass'

Paddington
14-07-06, 11:04
that is a stunning lyric hun[very sad but oh so true!]you have areal gift.Thanks 4 sharing it .love mary-rose.xxxxxxxxx

we are all in the same boat and can guide each other ashore

chucklehound
14-07-06, 12:43
Hi Ed, that is a great but sad poem, thanks for sharing:D

Take care

Chuckle

xxxx

manmoor
14-07-06, 12:55
Hi Ed,

Thanks for that. You have such a way with poetry its amazing.

Take Care

Mandy
xxxx

darkangel
14-07-06, 17:33
hi ed

your lyrics are touching as always - you have such a talent

darkangel

........life is for living not just for surviving

honeybee3939
14-07-06, 19:06
Thanks for sharing that ed,

You are very talented!


Love

Andrea
xxx

emma chant
15-07-06, 17:39
Ed,
You have a talent there,touching poem but very good.
xx

e chant