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twiglet
28-07-06, 21:08
Hi all, i've just written a poem, i dont know if i posted this on the right page but here goes...


Look in my eyes
what do you see
i'm not the person
i use to be
to scared to sleep at night
praying that one day
i'll be alright
the feeling of fear
just wont go away
it's inside of me each and every day
to go out of my house without being
afraid is something i lack
the voice in my head screams
"quick go back"
back to the place where i feel
safe and secure where no demon lies
trying desperately to erase the fear in my eyes
everyday i try hard to be
the person you loved
that once was me
i work so hard,cant you tell
i want so badly to get well
look in my eyes
what do you see
look deeper inside
i'm still me


Hope you all like it,
twiglet xx

den64
28-07-06, 22:06
Hi Twiglet

Thats such a lovely poem, and reminds me of me, keep them coming there great:D
Best wishes
Denise:D

eeyorelover
29-07-06, 00:55
Hi there :)
That is just awesome!!!
Thnx for sharing it with us :)
xxx
Sandy

Eclipse
02-08-06, 00:12
Hi twiglet,
only just read this - bit behind catching up with things at mo!
It's really expressive and touching.
Hope you're proud of it, you should be!

Magz
XX

Margaret
09-08-06, 01:00
Made me cry Twiglet! - its lovely.

Margaret