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Piscian Daydreamer
20-03-07, 19:11
Hi, i posted a few days ago about my anxiety of loving this girl... thank you so much for your time.

Your all right. She is going home to Portsmouth for 5 weeks now... There is no way i can wait five weeks without talking to her,,, i just can't wait, so ive decided, thursday, i will send her the poem in an attempt to ASK HER OUT.

My aim is not to fill her with some massive romatic gesture, just make her laugh, smile and remember me. I really hope it will go down well and she'll see the sweet side, not the desperate side.

HERE IS THE POEM, PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!

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Alison calls her Charlie... she’s such a classy bird
“What a stunner!” said Josh in Reflex... thats the first impression i heard

Loughborough must be special, if Charlie lives up there
She’s the girl of most lads dreams i’d say, the answer to any prayer

She dances like an angel, timidly rocking those hips
I must be the luckiest man alive... to have kissed those sweet little lips

She’s the Queen in any pack of playing cards, or better still the Ace of Spades
I know she’ll make a brill school teacher, especially with those grades

Charlie i’d love you to come out with me, one night, anytime anywhere
I’m dying to see you smile again and play with your lovely long hair

I’ve only met you twice, but i think your really nice
So come down to Brum or let me come up there, i’ll have the champagne on ice

The offer is still on Charlie!

Mark x

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What do u think?



I feel so bad inside, so lovesick. I shouldnt be like this. My anxiety has latched onto this girl and is punishing me. I feel like my whole life is being placed on her, like i have nothing else to look forward to. I need something else to think about... i've become so depressed its like its ALL OR NOTHING with this situation.

domino
20-03-07, 20:02
Well firstly, what a lovely poem, But how does this girl feel about you ,have you even asked her ? send it to her ,if you have,nt already, take it one step at a time. What will be will be.:winks: