PDA

View Full Version : My poem lol ('o',)



K4REN88
14-04-07, 13:46
I didnt know how much i would gain
from experiencing a little pain
not physical pain but mental pain
i know something crazy's going on in my brain

There once was a time when all was good
but now it just seems im misunderstood
no one seems to get what im going through
to me everyday is like living deja vu

off the the doctors i go with a sigh
hoping the feelings inside me will die
he talks and he talks about things i dont understand
then yet again i leave with tablets in my hand

as i step out the door my heart skips a beat
my legs feel numb i cant move my feet
my head is spinning and feeling all hazy
i just want to scream out im not going crazy

back at home i feel absolutley fine
i makes me wonder if ive gone back in time
being at home seems too help me forget
if i think about it ill just get upset

unemployed he money problems start to arise
the guiltiness comes as no surprise
although its something i cant control
the pressure on me soon takes its toll

people around me laugh at my expense
knowng full well i have zero defence
there are times i feel so down and so low
i just want support i want to let go

i know i can do it i know i can suceed
i just need some help in getting me freed
one day i know ill get what i want
but until that day ill just have to want

at least out of this ive learnt something new
its something i feel we all should do
appreciate life each and every day
dont waste a minute and youll be ok.

Pink Princess
14-04-07, 18:46
wow, i really like it and you have written it very well. thankyou for sharing xxx
take kare xx

tam
14-04-07, 22:13
thats really good really sums everything up,well done tracy:yesyes:

honeybee3939
15-04-07, 17:16
Very well put !:)

you are very talented thankyou for sharing !

Love
:hugs:
Andrea
xxxxx

kelbob
15-04-07, 17:29
aww thats a great poem..ty for sharing xxxxxxxxxx :hugs: xxxxxxxxxxxxx