The ending

[Pink Princess]

The ending


Darkness surrounds me
all i feel is pain
I've suddenly gone blind
blocked from sight again

backed a against a brick wall
all i feel is anger
suddenly i fall
down my deep dark hole

walking down a road
all i see is a bend
then suddenly i stop
my life is at an end

saffie
16

[kelbob]

aww..yet another - omg! - great poem from smelly bums mate lol xxxxxxxxx lym hugs xxxxxxxxx

[Ellen70]

really good poem little Niece Minnie but really wish you didn't have to go through what you do to write your poems.

Auntie Eibhlin :hugs: :hugs: :flowers: :flowers: