My latest song lyrics

[dave3177]

Yeah I am a rapper (lol) but there is a very lovin sensitive side to me also. One that writes lyrics to songs and here is one close to my heart about a girl i used to know and wish i was with right now but instead she is engaged to another who in my opinion could only think he could love her as much as I

Hope you like..........i need loads of opinions/feedback guys

Here it is - "A Case Of Those Brown Eyes Again"

Oh no, it seems Im falling
It must have been her charm that has got me
Reeling, Im a love sick ramblin man
And when Im in her arms, i know she's got me
Whoever would've dreamed this scene?
Not me, i was too hypnotised to see
There would ever be another chance to be
With you, but here I am again

Yeah she got me good
Straight through the heart,
Ignite this poor cupids spark
Yeah yeah yeah she got me good
With us, this love needs no disguise
Baby when I look into those brown eyes

A simple case of hazel-eyes callin'
Yeah she got me spun, some kinda spider web cruelty
I can't tell you when it started, only where it begun
Chalk another one up for I got blinded by beauty
Now Im freeze framed in time, everythin seems surreal
Realising this girl in question is lookin at me
Theres somethin kind of groovy about bein' able to see
This view, yeah here I am again

She's burning holes with those windows to her soul
What a soul burning brightly, worth more than gold
She's burning holes with those windows to her soul
God only knows I don't know what the future beholds

Yeah she got me good
Straight through the heart,
Ignite this poor cupids spark
Yeah yeah yeah she got me good
With us, this love needs no disguise
Baby when I look into those brown eyes

Yeah she got me good
Straight through the heart,
Ignite this poor cupids spark
Yeah yeah yeah she got me good
With us, this love needs no disguise
Baby when I look into those brown eyes

END

Dave x

Much love, its all for you!

[Lozzie]

Awwww dave hunny! :hugs: :hugs: :hugs: :hugs:

It really is beautiful, i know this is such a hard time for you right now. but be strong and you will get through this and meet a nice girl who will treat you right :)

Take care hunny
Always here for u

Love Laura xxxxxxx:flowers:

[clickaway]

Well, the words are great. You obviously have the gift Dave. :yesyes:

OK, what about the music? Can you do that, or maybe collaborate?

When your head is full of emotion and pain, doing this sort of thing not only works but can be very therapeutic.

Cheers

:)

[groovygranny]

Dave,

how very talented you are !

That was straight from the heart - and no messing.

Like Ray said it would be great if you put it to music, and then maybe post it on one of those websites where we could listen to it ?!

:yesyes:

:hugs::hugs::hugs:

:flowers:

[JulieAs45]

They are beautiful words Dave, straight from the heart :hugs:

You've got a great talent Dave, I hope it takes you to great places, you deserve it.:yesyes:

Will you still come in chatroom when you're rich and famous tho? :shades:

Good luck with that and everything else hun.:yesyes:

Julie
:flowers:

[shoegal]

That is beautiful. You have a real talent. :)

Love and hugs from shoegal xxx

[miff]

nice Dave mate real nice
you got to do sumthin with those lyrics mate make em a song bring this story to life it is beautiful
And that's commin from a bloody hillbilly from the bush who thinks heart is just bait ta catch ells in the creek.
Go get em Davo:yesyes:

[KrazyKaz07]

Hi Dave :)

Wow what a beautiful piece of song writing. What a fantastic talent you have there :yesyes: . Do you have any more??

I love listening to music and think I would be lost without it.