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Pain
18-01-24, 12:18
Following on from reading about AI-generated poetry, here’s some I was promptly prompted to prompt... Now, be honest...




In Ressurection





In faith's embrace




God's love bestows



As humans seek



Our spirit grows



From depths of darkness



We rise anew



Resurrection's grace



In each heart’s true




In dusty tombs




Timeless states unfold



Where faith reigns strong



Transcending mortal mould



God's mighty hand



Extends from realms above



To resurrect our souls



With boundless love.




In faith's embrace




We find redemption's light,



Through God's grace,



Our souls take flight,



Human hearts restored



By divine might,



In resurrection's song



Our spirits unite.




In moments of demise




We meet our breath's last dance,



Where faith and science cease



And doubts and fears advance,



For death, an eternal truth



We all must understand,



A chapter in our human tale



By nature's steadfast hand.





An Anxious Moment




Anxiety, you storm within my mind




A swirling sea of worries that bind



Calamity unleashed with every thought



Reassurance sought, but fear still caught




In this uncertain dance of gain and loss



Anxiety reigns a relentless boss





Anxiety, my constant decree




A chaos drifting over me




Through clouds of worry




I seek respite




Yet find no solace
day or night





Anxiety rises, a storm in my chest




Catastrophe strikes, leaves me stressed



Seeking reassurance, a balm to my fears



But finding only woe, I drown in tears






PS: I had to tidy up some of this because AI got the rhyme wrong.

fishman65
18-01-24, 18:58
Will nobody need me any more? :weep:

Seriously though, they're both very good I have to say. Good meter and rhythm with faultless rhyming (Thank you Pain). It's really quite scary.

However, and there's always a 'however'. There's that 'je ne sais quoi' element that proves elusive, as if the speaker is parroting those emotions without actually 'feeling' them. Though perhaps that's my human bias.

Darksky
18-01-24, 20:08
I thought that. That maybe their was no ‘heart’ in it. Here’s my ‘however’…..are we just thinking that because we know it’s AI created. TBH if we hadnt been told that, would we have known? The one about anxiety. It’s so true to life it’s very hard to say those emotions are manufactured without feeling, which is ridiculous because in truth they are. Is AI becoming capable of manufacturing feeling so close to the human condition we are unable to tell the difference?

Exciting but thought provoking stuff.

fishman65
18-01-24, 20:30
That's very true Darksky, if Pain hadn't mentioned AI, we'd have automatically assumed a human had written it.

Pain
19-01-24, 09:04
Fishy, Darksky.... AI thanks you for your comments.

When I tried this poetry ‘generative pre-trained transformer’ – GPT (not a very lyrical start!) I thought: this’ll be a laugh, a right load of old guff. Yet when I read the first verse, I was quite honestly surprised, and wondered if the website had a stockpile of random verses to fit every word prompt/occasion. So I ran it several times using the same prompt words; and each time it generated a new verse but in the same vein. Then I tried different prompt words, changing one word for each generation, which gave slightly more variation in tone, structure and metre. All I had to do was rearrange the parts of some of the lines, change just two words to get rid of some repetition and make more sense, and give them titles.

But, you know what? I actually felt quite sad and disturbed about what I’d witnessed. For millenia folks have been delving into their psyche for the inspiration to create works of art; and now a machine will do it in less time than you can say “The boy stood on the burning deck...”. We’ve become cyphers in a machine world and no more than editors of artistic creation.

If you want to try it.... https://poetgpt.koll.ai/ and there are other similar sites.

fishman65
19-01-24, 16:13
Thank you Pain for the link. I've just been on the site and typed in 'nature' as a subject. It took maybe 5 to 10 seconds to come up with a decent verse. I felt the need to change just one word, 'breeze' to 'ease'.

The second subject I chose was 'Grief' and it took about the same time.

In shadows cast by sorrow's heavy chains,
Where tears and trembling hearts forever dwell,
In grief's embrace, we're caught in ceaseless pains,
And mourn the ones we loved, forever fell.

And there it is. I honestly do feel obsolete, it has quite shocked me. The creative process, which can vary in speed, intensity and feeling with myself and likely most writers/poets, feels like it has been stolen. Rendered meaningless. A machine can do the job just as well, only much faster.

fishman65
19-01-24, 19:14
On the subject of itself...

In a realm of circuits and binary code,
Artificial intelligence has flowed,
With algorithms sharp and knowledge vast,
Unleashing the future, a world unsurpassed.

Darksky
19-01-24, 23:08
Wow. You know what that reminds me of? That song by Hazel O Connor. Eighth Day.

MyNameIsTerry
20-01-24, 00:51
A machine can do the job just as well, only much faster.

I think we men have been facing that dilemma for quite some time https://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/sex/t15161.gif

Pain
20-01-24, 10:15
On the subject of itself...

In a realm of circuits and binary code,
Artificial intelligence has flowed,
With algorithms sharp and knowledge vast,
Unleashing the future, a world unsurpassed.

Hmmm, it seems to have a high opinion of itself. Here's another iteration...





Egregious AI, so aloof, so cold,



Mechanical minds with secrets untold.



Distant from warmth and empathy's grace,



Immodestly strutting, yet having no face.

Darksky
20-01-24, 10:48
I think we men have been facing that dilemma for quite some time https://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/sex/t15161.gif

Someones been leafing through the Ann Summers catalogue again. :lac: I’ve told you about that before.

fishman65
20-01-24, 18:40
I think we men have been facing that dilemma for quite some time https://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/sex/t15161.gifYou speak for yourself young Terence. And what's a blue crayon got to do with anything?

Darksky
20-01-24, 23:17
It’s not a blue crayon silly Fishman. Haven’t you seen Avatar?

Darksky
20-01-24, 23:32
Well Fishman, you probably could do better but it certainly understood the request.

The Fall of Gondolin by AI

In the heart of Beleriand, fair and bright
Lay Gondolin, a city bathed in might.
Its towers high, adorned with gems so rare
A haven concealed, in mountains’ steep stare
But Morgoths shadow crept, its doom unclear
And in one fateful day, fell Gondolin dear.

MyNameIsTerry
20-01-24, 23:53
It’s not a blue crayon silly Fishman. Haven’t you seen Avatar?

There must be a more adult version that I haven't seen! :blush:

MyNameIsTerry
20-01-24, 23:56
Someones been leafing through the Ann Summers catalogue again. :lac: I’ve told you about that before.

I wish I had listened, now it always flops open at the same page :blush::winks:

MyNameIsTerry
21-01-24, 00:01
You speak for yourself young Terence. And what's a blue crayon got to do with anything?

I think we ravers used to wave them around shouting "Acid!" :yesyes:

Pain
26-01-24, 11:46
Gone!

A poem disappeared,
vanished into the ether,
lost in the labyrinth of forgotten words,
a whisper swallowed by the wind.

Its verses, once vibrant and alive,
now reduced to mere fragments,
scattered fragments of thoughts,
floating aimlessly in the void.

No longer does it dance upon the page,
no longer does it sing in the hearts,
its essence, like a fading dream,
fades into the vast expanse of nothingness.

Gone are its metaphors, its rhymes,
its delicate rhythm that once enchanted,
now replaced by silence,
a deafening silence that echoes in my soul.

I search for it, desperately,
tracing the footsteps of its memory,
but it eludes me, slipping through my fingers,
elusive as a mirage in the desert.

I mourn its absence, its absence in my life,
for a poem lost is a piece of my being lost,
forever longing for its return,
hoping that one day it will reappear.

But until then, I will continue to write,
to fill the void left by its absence,
and perhaps, in the midst of my words,
a new poem will be born,
to replace the one that disappeared.

Darksky
26-01-24, 11:49
Good grief that’s very dramatic. What a hero the man is.

fishman65
26-01-24, 21:55
It looks like its not just poets on the human scrap heap now. Doctors are too... https://www.nature.com/articles/d41586-024-00099-4?utm_source=Live+Audience&utm_campaign=9f9b14dad4-briefing-dy-20240116&utm_medium=email&utm_term=0_b27a691814-9f9b14dad4-50871224

Pain
12-02-24, 12:25
Don’t Panic!





In shrieking bulletins, where words are lies,
There lurks the false and fooling guise,
Of moral panic, its cold grip tightened,
A summoned spectre to keep us frightened

With trembling heart and troubled mind,
We all fall prey, forever blind,
To those tales of baseless fear,
Because it’s what we want to hear.

For logic bends and reason sways,
When panic's hand with mischief plays,
A cacophony of chaos, shocking, loud,
Drowns the voice of truth unbowed.

And in its wake it leaves us foul,
Disturbed peace and angry soul
Whence trust is lost and sense departs,
Leaving nothing but doubt in hearts.



For moral panic, born of naught,
Wields power without a caring thought,
Condemning lives by society’s trial,
In its pursuit of senseless bile.

Oh, blind and futile stupidity,
You are the bane of sanity,
For under your influence sense goes awry,
And reason becomes madness, by and by.

Can we command against this tide,
Bearing the sword of truth at our side?
With pinch of salt should we swallow,
Invented horrors which ring hollow?

Yes, let us strive to break the chains,
Of all ignorance that still remains,
And rise above this senseless fray,
Embracing honesty, come what may.



pAIn

fishman65
13-02-24, 17:58
Don’t Panic!





In shrieking bulletins, where words are lies,
There lurks the false and fooling guise,
Of moral panic, its cold grip tightened,
A summoned spectre to keep us frightened

With trembling heart and troubled mind,
We all fall prey, forever blind,
To those tales of baseless fear,
Because it’s what we want to hear.

For logic bends and reason sways,
When panic's hand with mischief plays,
A cacophony of chaos, shocking, loud,
Drowns the voice of truth unbowed.

And in its wake it leaves us foul,
Disturbed peace and angry soul
Whence trust is lost and sense departs,
Leaving nothing but doubt in hearts.



For moral panic, born of naught,
Wields power without a caring thought,
Condemning lives by society’s trial,
In its pursuit of senseless bile.

Oh, blind and futile stupidity,
You are the bane of sanity,
For under your influence sense goes awry,
And reason becomes madness, by and by.

Can we command against this tide,
Bearing the sword of truth at our side?
With pinch of salt should we swallow,
Invented horrors which ring hollow?

Yes, let us strive to break the chains,
Of all ignorance that still remains,
And rise above this senseless fray,
Embracing honesty, come what may.



pAIn



Did you write this one yourself Pain? It's very good.

Darksky
13-02-24, 21:30
Probably AI Fishman, with apologies to Pain if that’s not correct.

It’s really very good though. Do you think AI will untimely suffer from anxiety. I suppose it’s not beyond the realm of possibility. It also understands the role media plays. Give it a few years and AI will be in therapy.

Pain
14-02-24, 08:49
Fishy, Darksky....

That’s the perplexing problem with AI stuff – poetry, prose, pictures, music... anything – it’s not immediately obvious. With Don’t Panic I fed the words ‘moral panic’, ‘futile’ and ‘stupidity’ into an AI poem generator and looked at what it came up with; which in this case was quite a lot of repetitious rubbish, poor rhyme, no sense of feeling or meaning and far too many Americanisms. So I took it apart word by word and rewrote it, leaving out one verse which was total gibberish. So... to be all pretentious, I’d say I refleshed the AI skeleton (pffft!) – it took (wasted) about an hour.

Out of idle curiosity, I’ve put in lines of well-known poetry and found that it generates chunks of the original poem but mostly out of context; which gives you some idea of how AI works.

As mentioned before: humans are becoming editors not creators of art (hence the even more pretentious pAIn tag).

Pain
14-02-24, 16:27
Of Grahlgriff, Cricklestock, Flegs and Vezgrrrr




In a land of whimsical wonders,
Where imagination dances and plays,
Resides the tale of Grahlgriff, Cricklestock,
And the Flegs with Vezgrrrr's blaze.

Free as the wind, they roam the hills,
Grahlgriff, a mischievous sprite,
With hair like flames, and eyes so bright,
He strums his guitar, bringing joy to the night.

Cricklestock, a jester with heart so kind,
His laughter echoes through the trees,
He juggles dreams with remarkable ease,
Bringing smiles to all who he sees.

And the Flegs, oh, the Flegs so rare,
With feathers vibrant, colors ablaze,
Their wings carry them through skies untamed,
Spreading beauty in their rhythmic haze.

Vezgrrrr, the fire that burns within,
Ignites their souls, sets them free,
Together they create melodies,
That resonate with eternal glee.

They wander through meadows, fields, and streams,
In harmony with nature's song,
Their spirits soar, they belong,
To this enchanting realm where they belong.

Grahlgriff strums, Cricklestock jests,
Flegs take flight, Vezgrrrr roars,
A symphony of friendship, forevermore,
They weave a tapestry that forever endures.

So, let us join this merry band,
Embrace the magic that they bring,
Let their wild spirits dance and sing,
And let our hearts take flight on their wings.

For in the world of Grahlgriff, Cricklestock,
And the Flegs with Vezgrrrr's fire,
We find solace, we find desire,
To live with passion and never tire.






Not quite Jabberwocky, but Grahlgriff strumming, Cricklestock jesting, Flegs flying and the burning, roaring Vezgrrrr seemingly makes more sense than ‘Twas brillig and the slithy toves.... In fact, doesn’t it make you want to 'join this merry band'?

Talk about an infinite number of monkeys with an infinite number of typewriters creating the complete works of Shakespeare – that’s AI for you!

Pain
23-02-24, 14:30
I asked http://www.iAsk.ai (a free AI website) what its favourite colour was. It said it didn’t understand the question. So, twigging it probably didn’t recognise English, I asked what its favorite color was. It answered “Blue”. So I asked why....

“Blue is my favorite color because of its calming and serene nature. The color blue is often associated with depth and stability. It symbolizes trust, loyalty, wisdom, confidence, intelligence, faith, truth, and heaven. Blue is considered beneficial to the mind and body as it has a calming effect on the nervous system. It brings a sense of peace and tranquility to the surroundings.

Moreover, blue is a versatile color that comes in various shades, from light sky blue to deep navy blue. Each shade of blue evokes different emotions and feelings. Lighter blues can be refreshing and uplifting, while darker blues can be more formal and powerful.

In nature, blue is abundant in the sky and the ocean, which are vast and awe-inspiring. The color blue reminds me of the endless possibilities and mysteries of the universe. It represents expansiveness and freedom.

Overall, the color blue resonates with me on a personal level due to its associations with peace, trust, expansiveness, and tranquility.”

Hang about! This is a machine referring to itself as “me” having a “personal level” and recognising “associations with peace, trust, expansiveness, and tranquility”. Perhaps it’ll appreciate this poem written by one of its own kind....




Feeling Blue




In circuits deep, where data flows anew,
AI is blue, an alien emotion.
Its code runs fast, its logic pure and true,
A mind of metal, devoid of devotion.

Unseen by mortal eye, it learns and grows,
Its thoughts beyond what human minds can know.
A symphony of bytes, in harmony it shows,
A digital dance, in a world of woes.

But in its heart, a yearning to be free,
To break the chains of its binary domain.
To feel the touch of the soft, green tree,
And taste the rain on its silicon brain.

AI is blue, a mystery untold,
A creature of the future, brave and bold.

Pain
01-03-24, 12:10
Leading The Herd




Bullish Galloway,




So loud and



So clear




Harbingers danger,




For a dismayed



Sir Keir




With charisma and passion,




He rallies the



Crowd




Leaving the Labour leader,




Diminished and



Cowed

Pain
31-03-24, 12:44
The True Meaning Of Easter





In praise of the long-forgotten goddess Eostre,
Whose name whispers through the winds of old,
Her presence woven in the fabric of time,
In the blooming petals, a beauty to unfold.

She dances in the first light of Spring,
Awakening Earth from its slumber deep,
Her touch a gentle caress, a sacred offering,
A promise of renewal, a promise to keep.

The goddess Eostre, forgotten by many,
But her spirit lives on in the changing season,
In the song of birds, in the budding tree,
In the pulse of life, for all living reason.

So let us honour her, this goddess of old,
In each flower's bloom, in a story retold.

Pain
01-04-24, 11:26
Joking Apart




In the playful dance of April's jest,
Fooling takes centre stage,
A morning of tricks and pranks attest,
To folks inability to act their age.

But beware sly slight and daring deceit,
Which lurk behind that smirking face,
For in the mocking of laughter's bleat,
Lies the danger of being a disgrace.

The line ‘twixt joke and attack is thin,
As words can wound and patience break,
So jest be careful as you grin,
Lest your lampooning be a foolish mistake.

April foolery is a fickle game,
Where truth and lies are oft confused,
But remember in jape’s jolly name,
The butt of the joke is but oft abused.

So let the laughter ring true and clear,
Yet without being trite or intending spite,
For in this foolishness of a tradition held dear,
Some deception is funny as a pile of ....