Picture of Deception

[thevoicewithinme]

No one can comprehend,
Why she wouldn’t want to live,
Why she feels she has no value,
Nothing worthwhile to give.

From the outside of her house,
You view the model family,
But the windows are kept closed,
Curtains drawn, so you can’t see.

And inside on the wall,
Hangs the "picture of deception"
Gracefully displayed,
To grab everyone’s attention.

If you walked her steps through life,
The true picture you would see,
And you too would seek a way,
To finally be free!

[den42]

hi
well i dont really know what to say about the poem, personally i think its a terribly depressing ode, i just hope that anybody who is thinking that way really gets the help they deserve as life can be good even though we have things thrown at us they are obstacles to overcome

denise

[freakedout]

Hi thevoicewithinme

I think the poem is good, I am sorry if it how your feeling, but it rang true with me.

Take care,

Freaky