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The Fool
24-08-08, 12:52
hey ive written a song.i no i come here and im always bubbly charli jokeing about having fun jokeing about school and boys etc etc but i also hide alot of stuff and i sorta wanted to get it out and as you no i do that by writeing songs so you no give it a read tell me what you think like always.

there always seems to be upset
whether is caused or coming from me
i joke it off
nothings happend
play make belive
smiles and laughing

strip it away
show the flesh and bones
emotions out in the open
wear my heart on my sleeve
gotta fight for survial
just the way it has to be
cant show the girl behind the girl
sad and lonely

so depressing
got no life to lead
just exsisting
hanging around on my dusty shelf
wait for somone to turn it around
set my world right

strip it away
show the flesh and bones
emotions out in the open
wear my heart on my sleeve
gotta fight for survival
just the way it has to be
cant show the girl behind the girl
so sad and lonley

i find it hard to trust
people find me hard to hold on to
just when i open up
i slip away
back to my darkness
dont hold on to the past
focus on the future

strip it away
show the flesh and bone
heart on my sleeve
dont show the girl behind the girl

i never let her talk
but this time shes singing from within
shes hurt,she cries
her world may never be right again
never the same

Wolfie
24-08-08, 12:58
Wow hun, straight from the heart, huge impact, can feel every emotion you were putting across/conveying with every line. Has alot of strong emotions in it, and I want you to know that it's a great song, lyrics are very good.

Lots of love from the moon kitty xxxxxxxx

The Fool
24-08-08, 13:00
thanks hun


charli xxxx

pink daisy
25-08-08, 13:47
Aww teen that was really good hun!! You will get there you wont be on that dusty shelf for long xxx

Daisy xxx