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The Fool
02-09-08, 14:48
ok.so its not finished but i want to you read it first.i wanted to write a song for a guy but i didnt want it to be cheesy or stupid and i think i like it so give me your thoughts and when its done maybe ill send it to him or one day we will hear it on the radio for people to stop and think about there loved ones.

so many lives you change
well youve changed mine in so many ways
my world may never be the same
theres only you to blame

your stealing hearts with every word you sing
and every note you play
so many fall in love with you
i hate to think im like them
in any more than just this way

i cant explain the way i feel in just one word
it would take a million
just to describe
the thought of spending time with you

i hope that when you hear this song
it takes your breath away
just to let you no
this ones for you
every word is true
oh how i wish to be close to you
oh yes i do

so just for once
make my dreams come true
tell me you love me to

then you'll take me away
around the world
together we shall explore
singing our songs
we go hand in hand forever more.

titchjd
02-09-08, 15:20
Hi Teen ...thats brill m8 ....well done againx

I have 2 say send it ..even if they miles away ....I take it its about a very special person close 2 your heart but unreachable ????.....If you know what I mean xxxx

The Fool
02-09-08, 15:23
yes it is hes aloooong way away lol all the way across the ocean.i might send it when its properly finished and im completly happy with it

titchjd
02-09-08, 16:03
Yeah I would m8 .....i have an idea who u talkin about and u neva know he myt cum across the ocean 1 day m8 xxx

Def send it though when u are happy with it x