new song

[The Fool]

i wrote this tonight so erm read and tell me what you think :)

in my dreams im lying next to you
make belive a land
where all feelings are true.
if i could make a wish upon a far away star
one cold winters night
to make me feel alive and me
you would be the answer to all i need

slipping and sliding through all this is
never seems to end
just hurts me from the begining again
i wont call this love
love lasts forever
and i wont spend forever
without you.

your taking up my thoughts
draining all i no
from mind and soul
this has to end one day
for better or for worse

slipping and sliding through all this is
never seems to end
just hurts me from the begining again
i wont call this love
as love lasts forever
and i wont spend forever
without you.

time,times moving on
were growing and your moving futher out of reach
the two years that stand
linger like an unclimbable wall
stopping me saying all i need
before i stumble and fall
for you.

oh for you i fall
fall for you
oh for you i'll spend forever on my lonely platform
and sing till im weak
and love till im lost
for you.

[ConfusedByLife]

awwww. nice song teeny. Be proud :-)

[Cathy V]

As I said on emmas poem thread charli, your songs are great....really, you have alot of talent, i hope you can use it one day sweetie xxx