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kitty
08-01-06, 18:44
Here's a poem that i wrote last night,
let me know what you think!

So Alone

Curl up in my bed
Tears streaming down
The pain inside burns
I feel so alone

The girl up the road
Hiding under her covers
Scared of the monsters
Feeling so alone

The boy on the street
Shivering in the cold
Running away and
Feels so alone

The teen curled in a corner
Surrounded in needles
And bottles of pills
Thinks they're alone

The lady sitting on her bed
Knife in hand
Blood trickling out
So alone, so alone

The man at the bar
One drink after another
Dousing his loneliness
Nothing but alone

The girl hanging from the ceiling
Felt so alone
Alone. Always alone

The angles looking down
Weeping and crying
Pity and compassion
For all those alone

Myself, with realization
No one is alone
We're joined together
Everyone who feels alone

We're no longer alone
We have each other.



hope you like!

kiity aka kym
[:X]

superfran23
08-01-06, 19:00
yes i like, very much. well done [^]

seh1980
08-01-06, 21:36
Very nice :D

"If life were simple, word would have got around"

sillymoo
09-01-06, 08:06
very good hun!!!![Yeah!]