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Wannabeloved85
23-01-06, 20:00
Hope you like it :D

Step-by step will get you there,
Slowly does it,
But only if you dare.

Stand tall and be brave,
smile with pride,
And you shall be saved.

Just erase this fear,
Stand your ground,
And things shall soon be clear.

Life is on reserve,
Claim it back,
And live the life you so truelly deserve.

What you think?

Hope you liked it.

Keep Smiling, it makes the world a brighter place
Becci x

looby
23-01-06, 23:44
Hi Becci,

That is a lovely poem. And it is SOOOOOOOO right!!!!

Keep it up hun, you have got a real talent!!!

l
xxx

Wannabeloved85
24-01-06, 18:07
Thanks looby hehe i try!!! *curtsies*

leo05
24-01-06, 20:14
love the poem keep up good work

lea xx

kitty
29-01-06, 14:03
Hi hunni

Love the poem, keep them coming hunni

kym
xux

vorpalblade
18-02-06, 15:01
cool

Munchkin
23-02-06, 13:15
Thats a great poem! thanks for that.
xx

Alexandra
23-02-06, 13:37
Hi Becci

That really is a lovely poem.

Thankyou for sharing it with us. Looking forward to seeing more of your poems.

Take Care[8D]

Alexandra