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Fly away Katie
10-09-10, 17:54
I just wanted to share a poem that I recently wrote with my tummy pain in mind. Please let me know what you think (I love poetry and have written lots of it)


Reoccuring fear consumes me
Fueled by my own mind
Why did all this begin?
And when will it all subside?

I feel sad and hopeless
Lying all alone in bed
I get the dreaded pain
And my palms begin to sweat

Then shortly its over
I wonder what it could be
My hearts still thudding
Oh why can't I be free

My minds going mad
And the butterflies, crazy
The things i'll do for a distraction
Are making my perseption hazy

I push away those I love
in fear that it'll come back
It comes in waves and ruins my day
And my soul begins to crack

Is this all in my head
As I waste away, waiting for a pain
Is my transfiction becoming an addiction
Can I really be that insane?

I pray each night that I will wake
Without a horrible feeling
To be normal again, would be heaven
Id be bouncing of the ceiling.

Dear god, Please take my pains away
And let my soul be free
I'll develop new sight and make things right
You'll be damn proud of me.

KK77
10-09-10, 17:59
That's lovely Katie - although I'm sorry about your stomach pain pffft

I hope you're feeling better today?

margaret jones
10-09-10, 18:21
Katie that is fantastic and shows your true feelings Bless you I hope things get better soon for you

Maggie xx

If i could wave a magic wand and banish your pain today
Katie Katie I would be waving it to you today .:hugs:

What rubbish i am at poetry but the thought is there xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Natalie x
10-09-10, 23:36
That's really good Katie Its good to get our emotions and feelings out. Makes us feel a bit better. Hope you feel better soon x

MrBlue
11-09-10, 00:38
Wow this poem is amazing, really can relate to it! 10/10 :D

Ambers
11-09-10, 20:23
Katie - you seem like a beautiful person and I would be proud to have a daughter who is so creative...you have so much to give that you will beat this! x

Hazel B
11-09-10, 20:30
You have beauty on the inside and outside. x

Heidi1981
11-09-10, 20:32
Great poem Katie!

Thanks for sharing!

xx

Fly away Katie
11-09-10, 22:29
Thank you so much for all your replies. Each and every one means a lot to me. The fact that I have your support and faith gives me the strength and courage for tomorrow :blush: x x x x x x x x