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    THESE TEARS I CRY, FOR HEAVEN.

    <center> almost all of my poetry comes from some kind of pain, or depresive emotion, i lied down for a nap, and when i woke there was music playing in my head, a hard rock ballad, sounding allot like cinderella's music, so i closed my eyes, and this is what i heard,




    Heaven,
    Was in the palm of my hand,
    Then my fingers lost there grip,
    Now alone here I stand.

    I said heaven,
    I was almost home free,
    you broke into my heart,
    And then you threw away the key.

    Tear, drops, fall,
    And I cry out your name,
    The love that I have lost,
    None will ever be the same.

    Oh please heaven,
    Come back to me,
    i am nothing with out you,
    its with you i want to be

    Now heaven,
    Closed its gates on this man,
    So heartless I do stand,
    Back here where I began.

    And heaven,
    Is know longer the place for me,
    The glowing light of love,
    Is something I think ill never see.

    So, tear, drops, fall,
    And I still cry out your name,
    This love that I have lost,
    I know, I will never be the same.

    Oh please heaven,
    Come back to me,
    i am nothing with out you,
    its with you i want to be



    Oh heaven,
    I am begging you please,
    Listen to my heart,
    I am down here on my knees.

    Tears from heaven,
    Raining down on my face,
    Telling me they are sorry,
    I’m not welcome in this place.

    My, tear, drops, fall,
    I am crying out your name,
    Please my love don’t go,
    Life just will not be the same.

    Oh please heaven,
    Come back to me,
    i am nothing with out you,
    its with you i want to be


    Its heaven,
    I can no longer see,
    I’m now in the dark,
    And this is where I will be.

    For eternity.

    Oh please heaven,
    Heaven,
    Come back to me,

    I said heaven,
    Heaven,

    Please come back to me.


    the title came from both the words, and the tears i cryed writing it down, this is the first song i have ever writen,



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    the tears i cry will forever be in vein

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    Ed, this is so touching, beautiful but sad

    Take care
    Daisybun

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    that is a stunning lyric hun[very sad but oh so true!]you have areal gift.Thanks 4 sharing it .love mary-rose.xxxxxxxxx

    we are all in the same boat and can guide each other ashore

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    Hi Ed, that is a great but sad poem, thanks for sharing

    Take care

    Chuckle

    xxxx

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    Hi Ed,

    Thanks for that. You have such a way with poetry its amazing.

    Take Care

    Mandy
    xxxx

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    hi ed

    your lyrics are touching as always - you have such a talent

    darkangel

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    Thanks for sharing that ed,

    You are very talented!


    Love

    Andrea
    xxx

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    Ed,
    You have a talent there,touching poem but very good.
    xx

    e chant

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