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    A poem

    Hi all, i've just written a poem, i dont know if i posted this on the right page but here goes...


    Look in my eyes
    what do you see
    i'm not the person
    i use to be
    to scared to sleep at night
    praying that one day
    i'll be alright
    the feeling of fear
    just wont go away
    it's inside of me each and every day
    to go out of my house without being
    afraid is something i lack
    the voice in my head screams
    "quick go back"
    back to the place where i feel
    safe and secure where no demon lies
    trying desperately to erase the fear in my eyes
    everyday i try hard to be
    the person you loved
    that once was me
    i work so hard,cant you tell
    i want so badly to get well
    look in my eyes
    what do you see
    look deeper inside
    i'm still me


    Hope you all like it,
    twiglet xx

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    Hi Twiglet

    Thats such a lovely poem, and reminds me of me, keep them coming there great
    Best wishes
    Denise

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    Hi there
    That is just awesome!!!
    Thnx for sharing it with us
    xxx
    Sandy

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    Hi twiglet,
    only just read this - bit behind catching up with things at mo!
    It's really expressive and touching.
    Hope you're proud of it, you should be!

    Magz
    XX

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    Made me cry Twiglet! - its lovely.

    Margaret

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