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    Red face My poem lol ('o',)

    I didnt know how much i would gain
    from experiencing a little pain
    not physical pain but mental pain
    i know something crazy's going on in my brain

    There once was a time when all was good
    but now it just seems im misunderstood
    no one seems to get what im going through
    to me everyday is like living deja vu

    off the the doctors i go with a sigh
    hoping the feelings inside me will die
    he talks and he talks about things i dont understand
    then yet again i leave with tablets in my hand

    as i step out the door my heart skips a beat
    my legs feel numb i cant move my feet
    my head is spinning and feeling all hazy
    i just want to scream out im not going crazy

    back at home i feel absolutley fine
    i makes me wonder if ive gone back in time
    being at home seems too help me forget
    if i think about it ill just get upset

    unemployed he money problems start to arise
    the guiltiness comes as no surprise
    although its something i cant control
    the pressure on me soon takes its toll

    people around me laugh at my expense
    knowng full well i have zero defence
    there are times i feel so down and so low
    i just want support i want to let go

    i know i can do it i know i can suceed
    i just need some help in getting me freed
    one day i know ill get what i want
    but until that day ill just have to want

    at least out of this ive learnt something new
    its something i feel we all should do
    appreciate life each and every day
    dont waste a minute and youll be ok.

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    Re: My poem lol ('o',)

    wow, i really like it and you have written it very well. thankyou for sharing xxx
    take kare xx
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    Re: My poem lol ('o',)

    thats really good really sums everything up,well done tracy

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    Re: My poem lol ('o',)

    Very well put !

    you are very talented thankyou for sharing !

    Love

    Andrea
    xxxxx
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    Re: My poem lol ('o',)

    aww thats a great poem..ty for sharing xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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