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The ending
Darkness surrounds me
all i feel is pain
I've suddenly gone blind
blocked from sight again
backed a against a brick wall
all i feel is anger
suddenly i fall
down my deep dark hole
walking down a road
all i see is a bend
then suddenly i stop
my life is at an end
saffie
16
everything will be ok in the end
if its not ok then its not the end
minnie xxxx
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aww..yet another - omg! - great poem from smelly bums mate lol xxxxxxxxx lym hugs xxxxxxxxx
...............................your smile brightens my day ...
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really good poem little Niece Minnie but really wish you didn't have to go through what you do to write your poems.
Auntie Eibhlin
'Come away o human child to the waters and the wild.' - Yeats
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