Some of my poetry

[Darksky]

I can see that in slow motion. Particularly the bubbles of water being scattered upwards,

Another good one

[Carnation]

The Daughter's Gaze is brilliant fishman.
I like the Starling one as well. Although short, very impactful.

[fishman65]

Aww thank you both, that's very kind xxx

[fishman65]

Marie

There is a young woman
who comes at night,
in her clear blue eyes
there lies love's light.

With gentle smile
upon pale lips,
she smooths his sleeping
brow with love's tender kiss.

And yet stay she cannot
for she is but a dream,
that flits through his sleep
though to him it would seem,
as she turns away to depart,
that she laid her soul upon his heart.

May 2025

[Scissel]

^Beautiful

[fishman65]

Aww thank you Scissel

[fishman65]

Lexie

You are gone now my love,
your silence lays beside
my bed,
upon the now cold rug.

And yet still, upon instinct,
I reach down, in search
of your warm head,
in search of your
nuzzling nose.

And find again, in my
heart's sudden stilling,
you are gone,
you are gone,
you are gone.

September 2025

[Carnation]

Aww fishman, I really felt your words

[.Poppy.]

That is a lovely poem, fishman.

[fishman65]

Carnation Poppy Thank you both xxxx