Thank you Fishman, I shall treasure it. It means a lot at this time and the fact you bought in her favourite poem is lovely.
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Thank you Fishman, I shall treasure it. It means a lot at this time and the fact you bought in her favourite poem is lovely.
xxxx
It’s a cruel beast that you feed…..
Ghost…Spillways
OK well another very belated reply here from myself. Carnation thank you for your very kind words And of course, Darksky It was an honour for me to write it and hopefully gives you at least, a degree of comfort. There is something timeless and eternal about streams/rivers, forever running, on and on.
Right, I've just finished another poem 'Robin'. The other day I sat with suet pellets in my hand, and a Robin snatched one pellet. But yesterday he perched about 4 times on my palm, on 2 occasions for maybe 5 or 6 seconds. It was an amazing and I felt, honourable experience. Will type up now.
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'It was a wedding ring, destined to be found in a cheap hotel, lost in a kitchen sink, or thrown in a wishing well' - Marillion, Clutching at Straws, 1987
Robin
Your chain of silver notes,
adorn my senses,
poured, fluid as
waterfalls.
When you alight upon
my outstretched fingers,
as if upon my heart.
And in your bright eye
my reflection lingers,
little thinker,
wondrous spirit,
knower of my soul.
April 2024
'It was a wedding ring, destined to be found in a cheap hotel, lost in a kitchen sink, or thrown in a wishing well' - Marillion, Clutching at Straws, 1987
Lovely, I think the extra length makes it perfect.
It’s a cruel beast that you feed…..
Ghost…Spillways
Adorable poem fishman.
I love Robins.
Thank you both
They both take pellets from my hand now. I only ever seem to see one at any one time, but they're definitely a pair because one has no tail.
'It was a wedding ring, destined to be found in a cheap hotel, lost in a kitchen sink, or thrown in a wishing well' - Marillion, Clutching at Straws, 1987
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