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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Thank you Fishman, I shall treasure it. It means a lot at this time and the fact you bought in her favourite poem is lovely.

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    Re: Some of my poetry

    OK well another very belated reply here from myself. Carnation thank you for your very kind words And of course, Darksky It was an honour for me to write it and hopefully gives you at least, a degree of comfort. There is something timeless and eternal about streams/rivers, forever running, on and on.

    Right, I've just finished another poem 'Robin'. The other day I sat with suet pellets in my hand, and a Robin snatched one pellet. But yesterday he perched about 4 times on my palm, on 2 occasions for maybe 5 or 6 seconds. It was an amazing and I felt, honourable experience. Will type up now.
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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Robin

    Your chain of silver notes,
    adorn my senses,
    poured, fluid as
    waterfalls.

    When you alight upon
    my outstretched fingers,
    as if upon my heart.

    And in your bright eye
    my reflection lingers,
    little thinker,
    wondrous spirit,
    knower of my soul.

    April 2024
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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Lovely, I think the extra length makes it perfect.
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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Adorable poem fishman.
    I love Robins.

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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Thank you both

    They both take pellets from my hand now. I only ever seem to see one at any one time, but they're definitely a pair because one has no tail.
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