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  1. #191
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    Re: Some of my poetry

    I can see that in slow motion. Particularly the bubbles of water being scattered upwards,

    Another good one
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    Re: Some of my poetry

    The Daughter's Gaze is brilliant fishman.
    I like the Starling one as well. Although short, very impactful.


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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Aww thank you both, that's very kind xxx

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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Marie

    There is a young woman
    who comes at night,
    in her clear blue eyes
    there lies love's light.

    With gentle smile
    upon pale lips,
    she smooths his sleeping
    brow with love's tender kiss.

    And yet stay she cannot
    for she is but a dream,
    that flits through his sleep
    though to him it would seem,
    as she turns away to depart,
    that she laid her soul upon his heart.

    May 2025

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    Re: Some of my poetry

    ^Beautiful

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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Aww thank you Scissel

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