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    Letters of Love

    Abed by night,
    the stark ceiling my page,
    I write letters of love
    with these eyes.

    Eyes that search
    for remnants of you,
    for your face that flits,
    as shadows in
    dreams of longing.

    And still, still
    that turn of your head,
    those silken tresses,
    about pale shoulders falling,
    like tears, through all the years between us.

    October 2015
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    In a Daughter's Gaze

    Mementos of me
    may you keep,
    gathering years
    in back pockets,
    or held hidden
    within lockets.

    And I would never say,
    do not weep,
    if I came to you
    in troubled sleep.

    But let me live on,
    in a daughter's gaze,
    in her smile,
    her being,
    her gentle ways.

    May 2015
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    A Childhood Haunting

    That house crouches still,
    even today, daring us,
    cemented in long ago memory.

    White washed pale,
    and black staring eyes.

    A mouth gaping,
    with the glow of
    a hag's lantern.

    It's repute was whispered
    in schoolboy gossip,
    glowering from below
    that wooded hill.

    A house on the
    edge of our world,
    perched upon the
    rim of our childhoods.

    We pointed,
    amid dropped
    penny chews.

    Scarpering,
    bicycles frantic for
    the safe way home.

    May 2015




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    Flight of the Kingfisher

    Bullet blue on
    whirring wings,
    scores a river's
    wrinkled face
    of diamond rings.

    That flash and gleam
    in a languid breeze,
    below the arms
    of dozing willow trees.

    The minnows in
    their teeming hoards,
    corralled by perch
    that lunge and tease.

    Like a banded swarm
    of aquatic bees,
    in a scaled and
    feathered brotherhood,
    beneath the kingfisher's
    grateful ease.

    But harpoon blue
    in plunging pleasure,
    breaks the truce in
    search of treasure,
    scattering perch
    and minnow in
    equal measure.

    He shatters the
    water's crystal glass,
    in a furious explosion
    of liquid shards.

    And emerging in a
    myriad burst of stars,
    tosses a minnow
    with a flip and juggle,
    in nature's brutal,
    eternal struggle.

    August 2012
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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Brilliant fishman.

    I particularly like Letters of Love and in a Daughter's Gaze. Very touching and moving.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Carnation View Post
    Brilliant fishman.

    I particularly like Letters of Love and in a Daughter's Gaze. Very touching and moving.
    Bless you Carnation You're very kind.
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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Fishman…you do not disappoint So glad we discovered this talent during our trip to middle earth last night.

    Road Kill bought tears to my eyes.
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    Re: Some of my poetry

    Many thanks for your kind words Darksky. I’m sorry Roadkill upset you, sadly it’s an all too familiar scenario.

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    Not upset…a good poem is supposed to bring out emotions in its readers. They are meant to feel the anger, pain, sorrow or whatever the subject matter may be. As you say with Roadkill, it’s familiar to me having been through it so the emotion was easily bought up.
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    Optimism

    Optimism, he strides
    with the youth now.

    through the sunlit
    meadows of morning.


    While I cling to
    the rockface of age.

    his grey skin cracked
    with a thousand cares.

    and his stone bone-cold,
    whispering of death.

    August 2022
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