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    poems of mine ©

    hi all well here are some of my poems that i have been doing hope you all will like and let me know if there is anyway that i can making them better

    BEEN WELL


    I am confused, lost and feeling lonely in this world,
    Is me or are there others that understand,

    I feel like I am alone,
    In this world with my head going crazy,
    I need to delete things from my mind,
    But how I just don’t know,

    Fighting to understand why I am like this,
    Why have I been chosen to lead this path in life?


    I just have to hope that one day I will see how and then,
    I can start to rebuild my life,

    Then I will be able to go and help others,
    Who are going through what I would have been through?

    So till that day I will try to stay positive and believe,
    In the day that I will be well again. ©



    Help in hand



    If you lend a helping hand,

    To those who are not so good,


    Watch how you bring a smile,

    To their faces, make their day brighter,


    You may not feel that just by,

    Listening or supporting them,

    Will help them,


    But it helps just to know that you have,

    Someone there who is kind, caring and supportive,


    So take a look as,
    That person is you!
    ©















    Sea



    The sea can be calm,

    It can be rough,


    As the waves crash upon the shore,

    Who knows what they will brings,

    They might bring, sadness, or

    Happiness,


    You wont know until,

    You risk that chance to go,

    Down upon the sand and pebbles,


    Slip of your shoes,
    And walk toward the shoreline,
    Slowly dipping your toes,

    In to the chilly fresh water,
    Only then will you know,
    If you are calm or rough,

    Just like the sea,
    As it has so many different feelings,
    And emotions,
    That when it crashes upon the rock it,
    Is having a bad and lonely day,

    But when it is smooth and flat,
    That is when it is feeling relaxed and happy,

    So you to can chose to be like the sea,
    So go and chose your path ahead.©

    mountain

    Your mountain may seem too high to climb,
    You may think that you wont ever get there,
    But when you see others around you,
    Climbing there with you,
    You know that you are no alone,

    You are loved and liked,
    As they are there to help you,
    Lend you a help in hand when you,
    Aren’t to good or feeling blue,

    So let them in to your heart,
    Let them help you then
    You will see that you will make it
    All the way to the top of the mountain,
    No matter how big or small it is,

    So look above and know that you have your guiding angels,
    Helping you, and making you safe along your path,
    Helping you back up when you fall,

    So together we will all get to the peak of our mountain,
    Then we will be able to help and guide others to the top,
    We will be there guiding angel,
    And pass on how we coped and got there,
    So that they to can help others then one day,

    We will all be free from all our mountains or even it they just get smaller,
    Get to a point that we can handle them again.

    Then live life to the full and have more and more good days than bad.©




















    well that is a few of them i will post more soon if anyone like these
    tc all and b cool and smile

    lea xx
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    lea i loved your poems your realy talented and lea you will get better you no think positive i no its hard and easier said than don .i realy understand your a realy good m8 to me and do anything for anyone i try to help you as much as i can you no that im here 4 you lea ,and well don for your poetry its realy good thanks 4 posting .tc lea elaine xxxxxxxx

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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    Beautiful

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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    Hi Lea,

    Those are so good. But then I have already told you this. Hope that you keep posting new ones.


    Take Care,
    Tina xxxxxxxxx
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    Lea just lovely hun xxxxx
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    your poems are really good, your very talented...x

    luv dawny

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    I love poems

    They were lovelyxxxx

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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    Hi Babe
    Well are you finally going to listern to everyone and admit that your poems are brilliant?
    You have got a wonderful talent you have a magic way with words.It is great seeing you write more poems so keep it up Im very proud of you xx
    Soz when some make me cry but it is because to have a wonderful way with words.So stop reading this and get writing we all want to read more of your poems.
    Keep it up and believe in your self and finally admit you've got a talent or I'll pull your ears
    love ya
    susie xxxxxxx
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    thanks to you all for your kinda replys and susie you should know i never listen as well you know i think ma self as dumb stupid etc as well i know that i am!!

    but i will try to do more of them for you all

    many thanks

    lea xx xx xx xx
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    ok well just a few more for you all i hope you like these also

    BELIEVE IT AND ACHIEVE IT

    When you are feeling sad,
    Lonely and you want to get well,
    You have to believe in yourself,
    Know that you will be loved and wanted,

    You are never alone, and everyday I will be your,
    Angel to keep you safe and warm,
    Help you to smile, and bring laughter again in to your life,

    Help you to achieve, and believe in all that you are and will be,
    So go ahead and reach out for all the good!!©


    SUNSETS

    Sunsets are calming, soothing and relaxing,
    They can come in to your life,
    With out you even knowing they are there,

    Feel their warmth around your body,
    As you slowly start to relax,
    Feel your body slowly sink in to your chair,

    Relaxing as you feelings and emotions,
    Are starting to drift away,
    Leaving you free and refreshed,

    For the new day that lies ahead,
    You know that you are ready to tackle,
    Anything that the new day has to set upon you! ©


    SHINING STAR

    Every time you see a shining star,
    Make sure that you wish upon it,
    But be careful, as your wishes will come true,

    If you only believe, and trust in yourself,
    You can achieve anything you want to do,
    See I know that you are stronger than you think that you are,


    It makes no difference, who you are,
    I will be you shoulder when you need to cry,
    I will be there, to help you through the rough patches,
    Guide you along those bumpy roads ahead
    So if we stick together, and I know that we will surivive!!©

    well will post again soon, hope that you are all ok hugs to you all

    lea xx
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