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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    Lea you are a very gifted writer.

    When I started chating with you in the chat room, I could tell that you were a very special person. It wasn't until after I read your poems that I realised just how special you really are. You are an asset to this web site. Please keep writing, you probably don't realise how much effect your words have on as all.

    Go girl - I wait with baited breath for your next words of encouragement.

    Hugs and Kisses x x x x x

    SJ

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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    thanks sj and you are right i dont believe in my self - re poems or anything really and its gd to talk to you hope to talk to you again soon

    hugs

    lea
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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    BRIGHT STAR

    You are doing great,
    You really are,
    You are shining brightly like a star,

    You are right up there with,
    The brightest star around,

    Even if you feel down or alone just think of,
    The star that you are,
    And always will be

    You know that you are,
    That you can do anything you
    Want to do,

    When you are the bright star in the sky. ©


    OCEAN
    The ocean is like a mind full of grief,
    It has no choice as to the direction,
    Of which it flows or crashes upon the rocks,


    But only when time is allowed to go on it gets,
    Easier for you to understand the pain and confusion,
    Just like the water as it splashes up and catches, the wind
    Only then will the ocean have a choice, in which direction it will go,

    And as it does you to will have a choice to make,
    The choice of gaining strength to fight every minute of everyday,
    And even when you are feeling down and blue,
    We will be here to pick you up, and lend you help in hand,

    So go ahead and give it a try, as if you look deep in to the ocean,
    You will see the pain and hurt that it expresses,
    So now you can take your time to slowly release your hurt and pain,
    In a safe, friendly way! ©
    Last edited by leo05; 16-03-09 at 04:26. Reason: copyrighting everything lol
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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    Hi Lea,
    WELL DONE!
    I love your poems.
    Do you play guitar or keyboards? - I was just thinking that a couple of them (Bright Star or Shining Star) could make really good lyrics for a song - maybe both together with a bit of jiggling?!
    Do you have anymore? - keep up the good work
    love skitty xx

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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    thanks skitty and no i dont play guitar but play keyboard and yeah maybe they will
    and yeah i will post some more really soon

    and thank for letting me know that you like them

    hope you continue to do so lol

    hugs

    lea xx xx
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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    Believe

    What stops me from falling?
    Down in to the deepest darkest hole,
    The place where I never feel happy or safe,

    I know that if I only believe in myself,
    I will stay strong and that I can climb,
    My way back to happiness,


    Trust in and think back to all the good times,

    The smallest of thoughts that make you feel confident,

    Then act upon it as when you do,
    You will see how far you can go,

    I believe in you and am proud of you for taking,
    The biggest step of your life, and wanting to be you again!
    ©



    reaching for the top

    Keep looking up to the top of the highest mountain,
    One day you will succeed and reach the top,
    You will get to the peak,

    But until the day that you do,
    Remember you are strong, safe and
    Part of our group now,

    So whenever you are feeling lonely and blue,
    Just take a look at how far you have already come,
    And realise that you really don’t have much further to go,

    So go ahead and give it your best shot,
    Relax and have fun,

    You never know you may,
    Just start to love it again.
    ©

    ticking clock

    My mind is like a ticking clock,
    It never ever stops,

    If it get to wound up to,
    Much it is sure to break,
    And stop,

    But if you slowly let it go,
    It will coil out of control,
    Until neither you or I will,
    Be able to cope,

    With what will happen next,

    Will it be the end of it all?
    Who knows only time will tell.

    ©

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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    just a link to other poems i did when i first joined this site
    http://www.nomorepanic.co.uk/showthread.php?t=3908

    all these poems are © just havent added that yet
    Last edited by leo05; 16-03-09 at 04:28.
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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    very good, your very talented...love dawny

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    thanks dawny and hope you are all ok hugs and love to each and everyone of you

    lea xx
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    Re: just some poems i have done hope you like!!

    hi peeps well a few more for you all

    WILL I DIE SCREAMING??
    I scream no one hears,
    My cries for help,
    I feel so much pain inside,

    I want to run and hide,
    I don’t want to be here,
    Having to suppress my feelings,

    Of anger and hurt, sadness,
    It spins around in my head,
    Why do I have to feel this?

    What and how can I stop the,
    Feelings of heartache,
    If no one hears my cries,
    Will I die crying, screaming?
    ©


    MOTHERS DAY
    As another year goes by,
    I wonder how long I have to long,
    To see your smile and hear your loving voice,


    I miss you with all my heart and I will never forget you,
    You are always in my thoughts,
    As each day passes I wonder when,

    I will be near you; I know that you were not well,
    And were chosen for to be taken away from me,
    I love you and I hurt everyday that I see through,

    Knowing that you are near to me is what keeping me,
    Safe and warm, you are my mam and my mother,
    I am really proud to be able to call you that too,

    I will always love you and think of you no matter what!!
    ©

    LOST LOVED ONE
    When I am alone I cry for you,
    Take away my pain let me live free,
    Be the person that I want to be,

    I long to be within your arms,
    So that we will never be apart
    When you hold me I will be safe,

    I may sometimes bother you,
    Try to be in touch with you,

    Till I get use to losing you the way that I did,
    I know that tears will fall,
    Running down upon my chin,
    As I lay here wishing,
    That you were back in my life,
    ©

    WELL I HOPE YOU LIKE THESE AND I WILL TRY TO POST MORE REALLY SOON

    HUGS AND LOVE TO EVERYONE
    LEA XX
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