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    Smile I'll bring you back

    I cry as I walk through the twisted door
    I can’t see a way to help my tormented friend anymore,
    His soul has gone cold; he’s in a bad state,
    He needs me to help him, I am his mate.

    I’m twisted and torn and stuck in a rut
    I know I can help him if he lets me in, but,
    I’m stuck on the outside, cast away from the heat,
    I need to get back in but the wall has me beat.

    I can’t lose to a wall as a life depends,
    On whether he can see it and make amends,
    I try to break the wall it’s stuck fast,
    Whilst my friend is stuck in the past.

    I take down the wall brick by brick,
    And hope he will wait patiently for a bit,
    I try my hardest to super quick,
    And pray the loose bricks don’t tip.

    I have the wall low enough to climb through,
    And my friend, I run straight to you,
    I life you up and carry you out,
    And tenderly stroke your hair throughout.

    I have you safe I put you down on a soft bed,
    I watch you sleep and the cute way you’re led,
    I go back to the wall and brick it back up,
    Make it triple thick to save you with luck.

    From returning again to your darkest moment,
    And take you so the darkness is distant,
    I’ve brought you out I wont let you go,
    The one I’ve come to love is the one I know.

    Love Furious Angel xxx
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    Re: I'll bring you back

    Very evocative & thought provoking. Sad and yet victorious. Hope from despair. Thank you

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    Re: I'll bring you back

    aww hun its brought a tear to my eye well done
    keep it up

    love n hug

    lea xx
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    Re: I'll bring you back

    not bad angel not bad keep it going xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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