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    Post please read this.

    ok.so its not finished but i want to you read it first.i wanted to write a song for a guy but i didnt want it to be cheesy or stupid and i think i like it so give me your thoughts and when its done maybe ill send it to him or one day we will hear it on the radio for people to stop and think about there loved ones.

    so many lives you change
    well youve changed mine in so many ways
    my world may never be the same
    theres only you to blame

    your stealing hearts with every word you sing
    and every note you play
    so many fall in love with you
    i hate to think im like them
    in any more than just this way

    i cant explain the way i feel in just one word
    it would take a million
    just to describe
    the thought of spending time with you

    i hope that when you hear this song
    it takes your breath away
    just to let you no
    this ones for you
    every word is true
    oh how i wish to be close to you
    oh yes i do

    so just for once
    make my dreams come true
    tell me you love me to

    then you'll take me away
    around the world
    together we shall explore
    singing our songs
    we go hand in hand forever more.
    Last edited by The Fool; 02-09-08 at 15:39. Reason: i missed a line out lol
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    Re: please read this.

    Hi Teen ...thats brill m8 ....well done againx

    I have 2 say send it ..even if they miles away ....I take it its about a very special person close 2 your heart but unreachable ????.....If you know what I mean xxxx
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    Re: please read this.

    yes it is hes aloooong way away lol all the way across the ocean.i might send it when its properly finished and im completly happy with it
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    Re: please read this.

    Yeah I would m8 .....i have an idea who u talkin about and u neva know he myt cum across the ocean 1 day m8 xxx

    Def send it though when u are happy with it x
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