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    Question Fairy Poem, You View Please

    I'm currently in the middle of a cross stitch project for a friend of mine, she doesn't know that I'm doing it. It's for her first baby girl for her first christmas. It's a little fairy sat on a pink glittery bauble with baby's 1st christmas stitched on. It's the hardest project I've done so far because I'm using a harder fabric.

    Sorry for the rambling but well I don't genrally write poetry but I've written this to go with the cross stitch picture and well here it is:

    I send to you a little fairy to help you on your way.
    To guide you home and keep you safe,
    And never let you stray.

    She is yours forever, she will never see you cry.
    She'll guide you through the tough times,
    And never say goodbye.

    So love her oh so dearly and she will never let you down.
    Even if you make mistakes,
    She will never show a frown.


    So any comments would be well recived, good or bad and a title would be nice, so far I have Fairy Mother, or My Gift of a Fairy or A Fairy Friend. I'm not sure though.
    Last edited by PaganGothicAngel; 24-10-08 at 07:51. Reason: Poem line change thanks to Piglet :D
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    Re: Fairy Poem, You View Please

    Quote Originally Posted by PaganGothicAngel View Post
    So love her oh so dearly and she will never let you down.
    Even if you act very mean,
    She will never show a frown.
    That sounds gorgeous I'm sure your mate will be really touched.

    If I were to tweak it at all I would maybe put 'Even if you make mistakes' rather than 'Even if you act very mean'. Say it outloud and see what it sounds like.

    Oh and maybe a title of 'A Fairy Child'???

    Would love to see the finished project .

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    Re: Fairy Poem, You View Please

    Thank you for your comments and I like that line Piglet, I think I'll use that instead, it was that line that was bugging me
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    I come into this world so wild and free.
    Here I am,
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    Right here in the place where I belong'
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