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    A poem that i wrote last night

    Here's a poem that i wrote last night,
    let me know what you think!

    So Alone

    Curl up in my bed
    Tears streaming down
    The pain inside burns
    I feel so alone

    The girl up the road
    Hiding under her covers
    Scared of the monsters
    Feeling so alone

    The boy on the street
    Shivering in the cold
    Running away and
    Feels so alone

    The teen curled in a corner
    Surrounded in needles
    And bottles of pills
    Thinks they're alone

    The lady sitting on her bed
    Knife in hand
    Blood trickling out
    So alone, so alone

    The man at the bar
    One drink after another
    Dousing his loneliness
    Nothing but alone

    The girl hanging from the ceiling
    Felt so alone
    Alone. Always alone

    The angles looking down
    Weeping and crying
    Pity and compassion
    For all those alone

    Myself, with realization
    No one is alone
    We're joined together
    Everyone who feels alone

    We're no longer alone
    We have each other.



    hope you like!

    kiity aka kym
    [:X]

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    yes i like, very much. well done [^]

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    Very nice

    "If life were simple, word would have got around"

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    very good hun!!!![Yeah!]

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