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[Buby]

i tried to have a look at that website but it said it cudnt b displayed ill have nuva go lter. xx thnx neway sam xxxxxxxxx

[Buby]

this is my poem i wrote wen i heard me mum and dad arguin it isnt finished but ill finish it wen i can think of sumthin..........


From time to time, i believe that life is a wonderful thing,
But then the storm of arguements rise and screams begin to ring,
A punch is thrown, a vase is shattered, but i remain still,
But as i hear the nasty words, the shock makes me ill,
Mother and father at each others throats, makin it easy to cry,
Then i butt in and shout out the words, "why dont u just die?",
The silence is awkward, the tears fill my eyes, but what i ask is true,
Upsetting my brothers, sister and me, the horror sticks like glue,
Feeling our family is being ripped apart from one little bitchy fight,
And the screaming, punchin, yelling, crying, even gives our neighbours a fright,


thats where it ends so far.....so wot du all think?

hugs Rachel xxx

[Samantha]

sorry rach its: www.allpoetry.com
thats really good poem, have u written many before?

Sam

Positive thinking is the key to success!

[nomorepanic]

Rach

I think it is very good - very expressive. Well done you !

Nicola

[Buby]

hey sam,

im always writin poems its the only way i can express me feelins, unless i beat sum1 up but ive neva dun that and i dont think i will. cos im nice and sweet. ill check out that website l8r i gotta do a few fings first.

hugs Rachel xxxxxxxx

[sarah]

Amazing poem Rach, very deep.

You definately have talent there matey, no way I could write something as good as that!!!

love Sarah
xx