I wrote a poem

[dawnym]

SORRY

sorry for the way I can be
I've been hurt before you see
behind my wall is my heart
which before was torn apart
I built my wall which made me strong
so many people did me wrong
please be patient, please be kind
then all my love, your bound to find.

I wrote this to explain to my partner how I feel, he thought it said everything,so I wanted to share it with you.
I hope you like it

love Dawn

[jill]

What a lovely poem Dawn [^]

Thank you for sharing. I love reading poems.

LOVE JILLXX

[honeybee3939]

Thanks for sharing your poem Dawn, it was lovely.



Andrea
xxx

[Paddington]

oh Dawn that is a wondeful poem,and it says it all mate,it says it all!love mary-rose.xxxxxxxxxxxxx

we are all in the same boat and can guide each other ashore

[joanne87]

Hi Dawn

thats a really nice poem, thanks for sharing it with us. i think we can all relate to that

Take care

Jo x

[weepinky]

That is lovely Dawn, thanks for sharing it.

Love Pinky

[darkangel]

Dawn that is so lovely



........life is for living not just for surviving

[Coni]

Hi Dawn,
I loved your poem, sums it all up really well! Thanks for that!

love
Coni x

[a-little-room-to-breathe]

Hey dawn,
that poem is lovely, it just kind of expresses everything. well done!

love katie xxx

"If I can wipe from any human cheek, a tear,
Convince one man that hope and heaven are near,
Create more joy, more hope, less pain,
And though not one shall know my name nor drop a flower on my grave,
I shall not have lived in vain while here."