New business venture - Learning video editing!

[Carys]

Hiyer ! Very clever indeed, and as someone who is not clever with technology at all, it feels very wrong commenting - but as you asked I'll give my opinion anyway

I think the 'symmetrical central line reflection' of the tower blocks is a little dated as a concept. Also, the music repetitions before it moves on to a new motif takes a little longer than was 'comfortable' as a listener - what I mean is I was expecting it to change well before it actually did. However, don't listen to anything I say if you had strong concept ideas that you are happy with, I know nowt about the industry. (there are a few jitters in the background of the find few seconds, that distract from the smoothness)

The very best of luck to you AJ !

[ankietyjoe]

Hiyer ! Very clever indeed, and as someone who is not clever with technology at all, it feels very wrong commenting - but as you asked I'll give my opinion anyway

I think the 'symmetrical central line reflection' of the tower blocks is a little dated as a concept. Also, the music repetitions before it moves on to a new motif takes a little longer than was 'comfortable' as a listener - what I mean is I was expecting it to change well before it actually did. However, don't listen to anything I say if you had strong concept ideas that you are happy with, I know nowt about the industry. (there are a few jitters in the background of the find few seconds, that distract from the smoothness)

The very best of luck to you AJ !

Thanks Carys, that's actually very useful feedback.

Everything in this video is placeholder, and the music itself is from a 'demo' of sounds I created for a non related project, which is also placeholder. I was just trying to get my eye in with this style of video editing.

It's interesting what you say about the reflection effect though as it's still very much 'the thing' among the community I'm in. Maybe we haven't caught up with the mainstream yet!