Hiyer ! Very clever indeed, and as someone who is not clever with technology at all, it feels very wrong commenting - but as you asked I'll give my opinion anyway

I think the 'symmetrical central line reflection' of the tower blocks is a little dated as a concept. Also, the music repetitions before it moves on to a new motif takes a little longer than was 'comfortable' as a listener - what I mean is I was expecting it to change well before it actually did. However, don't listen to anything I say if you had strong concept ideas that you are happy with, I know nowt about the industry. (there are a few jitters in the background of the find few seconds, that distract from the smoothness)

The very best of luck to you AJ !